From 032197126c2f969a6f2f8f240caee527760dcd76 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Charcol Date: Mon, 5 Oct 2015 21:33:41 +1000 Subject: [PATCH] Changed wording in "Becoming an OSS student" for clarity --- README.md | 12 +++++------- 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-) diff --git a/README.md b/README.md index 8a481c7..b0d6b4a 100644 --- a/README.md +++ b/README.md @@ -25,13 +25,11 @@ Initially, we will also give preference to MOOC (Massive Open Online Course) typ ## Becoming an OSS student -Your registration for this graduation course will be effectuated after you create your profile in our [students profile](https://github.com/open-source-society/computer-science-and-engineering/issues/31) issue. +To officially register for this course you must create a profile in our [students profile](https://github.com/open-source-society/computer-science-and-engineering/issues/31) issue. > **"How can I do this?"** -Comment in [this](https://github.com/open-source-society/computer-science-and-engineering/issues/31) issue in order to officially enrol in our course, and make your public commitment! - -Use the following model to create your profile: +Comment in [this](https://github.com/open-source-society/computer-science-and-engineering/issues/31) issue using the following template: ``` - **Name**: YOUR NAME @@ -49,15 +47,15 @@ Course|Files Course Name| [link]() ``` -**IMPORTANT**: add your profile **once** and **after** you **finish** each course you can **return** in that issue and **update** your comment. +**IMPORTANT**: add your profile **only once** and **after** you **finish** each course you can **return** to that issue and **update** your comment. **ps**: In the *Completed Courses* section, you should link the repository that contains the files that you created in the respective course. > **"Why should I do this?"** -By making a [public commitment](http://renewablewealth.com/articles/the-power-of-a-public-commitment/), we have much more chances to **succeed** in our graduation, know better our fellows and share the things that we have done. +By making a [public commitment](http://renewablewealth.com/articles/the-power-of-a-public-commitment/), we have a greater chance of **successfully** graduating, a way to get to know our peers better, and an opportunity to share the things that we have done. -For those reasons we are using this strategy. +That is why we are using this strategy. ---